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Could do with a little more variety of shots and shots of different settings. Could focus less on the guy singing and the guitar. clone idea will be great if you pull it off
1/10/2012 9:04 AM
Location shots seem great. be sure to focus on the singing and his head as he sings. Depth of field would look great as well in some of the shots, it will really help add to the mood. An idea may be to have some moving shots along the guitar as opposed to just stills and zooms by using equipment such as the dolly and the crane.
1/10/2012 9:03 AM
- good, appropriate choice of location - perhaps have more natural shots of the artist 'having fun/relaxing' to give more meaning to the song (e.g. walking along the beach) - good variety of shots used
1/10/2012 9:03 AM
maybe more locations but overall very good
1/10/2012 9:03 AM
more close ups of the singer when he isn't singing. skating etc.
1/10/2012 9:02 AM
great idea. maybe mix up some more of the shots, love the cloning idea.
1/10/2012 9:02 AM
Good stuff, try a few different shots and a little faster edits. Like the use of close ups.
1/10/2012 9:02 AM
- maybe another change of location to add variety - I like the idea of the close ups the guitar being played
1/10/2012 9:02 AM
good choice of shots as they match the choice of song.
1/10/2012 9:02 AM
Really good... maybe more shots of the surrounding location.
1/10/2012 9:02 AM
Nothing to add really . really like the clone idea. good luck pulling it off
1/10/2012 9:02 AM
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